Well after 14-6 vote, I guess this writer should get back to work. Sorry for taking so long to post this but I had to make sure that everyone who wanted to vote had the chance to.
Next post will be next week by Friday, but there will be a few changes. So I only have one question for you, are you ready?
Thursday, March 15, 2007
Friday, February 16, 2007
Wednesday, January 03, 2007
Doctors notes - Grim News
At first we thought she was suffering for brain injury due to a fall but everything we have tried to do to date has not help.
Her heart rate, brain activity and organ activity is off the charts. If these continue to raise any further she will die. Everything we have tried to bring her back has failed.
Although her out look does look grim at this time, we have thought about calling Coruscant and speaking with Jedi temple. Maybe one of their healers will come to help us. There is little else left that we can do at this date and time but pray for her.
Doctor Delary, of Mirialan Southern Woman’s Hospital
Her heart rate, brain activity and organ activity is off the charts. If these continue to raise any further she will die. Everything we have tried to bring her back has failed.
Although her out look does look grim at this time, we have thought about calling Coruscant and speaking with Jedi temple. Maybe one of their healers will come to help us. There is little else left that we can do at this date and time but pray for her.
Doctor Delary, of Mirialan Southern Woman’s Hospital
Monday, December 25, 2006
Holiday post (Small break and it's fun)
I saw this last year and thought it sounded like fun.
Write a fictional remembrance for Wookie Life Day (or Hanukkah or Kwanzaa or Christmas or...) holiday.
Rules:
If your eyes are passing over this right now, (even if we don't speak often) please post a comment here on my blog with a COMPLETELY MADE UP AND FICTIONAL CHRISTMAS MEMORY of you and me. It can be anything you want -- good or bad -- BUT IT HAS TO BE FAKE. And, if you feel like it, when you're finished leaving your comment, post this little paragraph on your blog and be surprised (or mortified) with the memories people can create.
Oh and a second treat for everyone is this nice neat little card.
Have a safe Wookie Life Day (or Hanukkah or Kwanzaa or Christmas or...) holiday.
Write a fictional remembrance for Wookie Life Day (or Hanukkah or Kwanzaa or Christmas or...) holiday.
Rules:
If your eyes are passing over this right now, (even if we don't speak often) please post a comment here on my blog with a COMPLETELY MADE UP AND FICTIONAL CHRISTMAS MEMORY of you and me. It can be anything you want -- good or bad -- BUT IT HAS TO BE FAKE. And, if you feel like it, when you're finished leaving your comment, post this little paragraph on your blog and be surprised (or mortified) with the memories people can create.
Oh and a second treat for everyone is this nice neat little card.
Have a safe Wookie Life Day (or Hanukkah or Kwanzaa or Christmas or...) holiday.
Tuesday, November 28, 2006
Out of body experence part 1
flashback
My eyes open on their own as I hear “Child your not suppose to be here.” a gentle voice said slowly.
“Where’s here?” I ask quickly as I raise from a laying position to a sitting position
“Look around you, young one.” The voice said as I quickly looked around to see white as far as I could see and the figure of a female figure several feet away.
“I don’t understand,” I lightly said.
“Don’t you know what happened down there?” the voice asked
“No!” I cried then quickly asked “Am I dead?”
“No, you are in limbo” the voice said.
“Limbo!?” I asked as it register that I could in fact be dead.
“Yes, but worry not young one. Your not dead yet.” The voice flatly stated, then added. “You can still go back if you wish.”
“And if I do not?” I asked wondering what would happen to my body.
“Then you truly are dead, and I highly doubt that you will want that.” the voice said then without missing a beat added “Not that you’d have much to go back to.”
“What do you mean?” I asked.
“You see right now your body is in comatose state until you decide what your going to do.” The voice flatly stated.
“And just how long will my body be in a coma?” I quickly asked.
“As long as you’re here and don’t move on.” the voice answered.
“Move on?” I asked.
“Yes,” The voice flatly stated then when on to say “As long as you stay here and not go back or move forward your body will remind in the coma.”
“But how did I end up here?” I asked.
“Your body shut it self down after being drained from using far more force powers then it is use to ” The voice answered then added “Your powers have since tripled since you left the temple, but that should not concern you for the moment. You need to choose but choose wisely about what your going to do. You best think long and hard, stay here think about going back or moving on.”
“And if I don’t leave here and go back, then what happens to my body?” I asked.
“You already know the answer to that young one.” the voice answered back and went on to say “However I can not help you choose your path only answer your questions. And I must say you haven’t been behaving like a Mirialan lady or Jedi Padawan. But given the state of things as they are, I’ll let your small mistakes go for now.”
My mind raced as I wondered how this being could know such things about me.
My eyes open on their own as I hear “Child your not suppose to be here.” a gentle voice said slowly.
“Where’s here?” I ask quickly as I raise from a laying position to a sitting position
“Look around you, young one.” The voice said as I quickly looked around to see white as far as I could see and the figure of a female figure several feet away.
“I don’t understand,” I lightly said.
“Don’t you know what happened down there?” the voice asked
“No!” I cried then quickly asked “Am I dead?”
“No, you are in limbo” the voice said.
“Limbo!?” I asked as it register that I could in fact be dead.
“Yes, but worry not young one. Your not dead yet.” The voice flatly stated, then added. “You can still go back if you wish.”
“And if I do not?” I asked wondering what would happen to my body.
“Then you truly are dead, and I highly doubt that you will want that.” the voice said then without missing a beat added “Not that you’d have much to go back to.”
“What do you mean?” I asked.
“You see right now your body is in comatose state until you decide what your going to do.” The voice flatly stated.
“And just how long will my body be in a coma?” I quickly asked.
“As long as you’re here and don’t move on.” the voice answered.
“Move on?” I asked.
“Yes,” The voice flatly stated then when on to say “As long as you stay here and not go back or move forward your body will remind in the coma.”
“But how did I end up here?” I asked.
“Your body shut it self down after being drained from using far more force powers then it is use to ” The voice answered then added “Your powers have since tripled since you left the temple, but that should not concern you for the moment. You need to choose but choose wisely about what your going to do. You best think long and hard, stay here think about going back or moving on.”
“And if I don’t leave here and go back, then what happens to my body?” I asked.
“You already know the answer to that young one.” the voice answered back and went on to say “However I can not help you choose your path only answer your questions. And I must say you haven’t been behaving like a Mirialan lady or Jedi Padawan. But given the state of things as they are, I’ll let your small mistakes go for now.”
My mind raced as I wondered how this being could know such things about me.
Tuesday, November 21, 2006
Medical Transport
flashback
I woke in a transport of some sort .
I felt it take off but I didn’t see anyone close by to call for help.
I as tried to raise to sitting position, but felt my body struggle again it. I raised my head and looked down at straps that across my chest and legs.
I felt my eyelids turning into lead doors as they quickly closed tightly.
(Meanwhile)
“How she doing?” Asked one of the attending as she walked up to the med bed.
“Far as I can tell, no external injuries but she could internal injuries or worse.” The other attending flatly stated as she also went to the med bed and started with gently open one of young woman’s eyes and shinned a light into her eye. “No reaction to light.”
“Ma’am if you can hear me, squeeze my hand.“ the first attendant said as she waited for the young woman to try and respond to her request. After about 10 tense minutes of waiting “Nothing.” the attendant cried as she wrote it down in the medical file.
“ She could be in a comma.” the second attendant said aloud as she continued on with checking the woman vitals.
“Brian damage?” the first attending asked worried looked down at the young woman.
“We won’t know that until we get her to the hospital.” The second attendant stated as she continued to watch the young woman vital fail “Just how much longer till we’re at the hospital?”
“Our ETA is 10 minutes,” The driver stated.
Grapping for a neck brace, the second attendant called out to the driver “Careful with that driving, we don’t need more trouble back here.” as she fitted the brace around the young woman’s neck. As she turned to the first attendant and asked “Why wasn’t this done when first?”
‘I…I….I wasn’t sure it was needed.” the first attendant flatly stated
“We always use one, even if it looks like one is not needed.” The second attendant stated as she went on “If this young woman has brain damage, we could be liable because we didn’t use one, understand. And since we didn’t put one on her till now, I’m going to have to report it. It may end up costing us both our jobs.”
The first attendant sadly hung her head in defeat, then asked “How much longer to the medical center?”
“We’re just pulling up.” The driver called back to the attendants then added. “A medical team is waiting for her in room 1 with another team on stand by if she needs surgery..”
The attendants prepared the floating medical lift to carry the young woman into the hospital.
“What’s her status?” Called out of the doctors as she rushed out the medical centers doors.
“No external injuries but she hasn’t awoken since we got her on the transport. I tried to get a reaction to light, sound and touch so for she hasn‘t responded. All other vitals are weak but they are also strong at times. Plus we didn‘t get the brace on her till her had her in the medical transport.”
The doctor nodded as she looked down and said “Miss, if you can hear me. My name is Doctor Delary, I’m with the Southern Woman’s Hospital. Your going to be ok. “ She said as she ran with the floating medical lift.
TBC
I woke in a transport of some sort .
I felt it take off but I didn’t see anyone close by to call for help.
I as tried to raise to sitting position, but felt my body struggle again it. I raised my head and looked down at straps that across my chest and legs.
I felt my eyelids turning into lead doors as they quickly closed tightly.
(Meanwhile)
“How she doing?” Asked one of the attending as she walked up to the med bed.
“Far as I can tell, no external injuries but she could internal injuries or worse.” The other attending flatly stated as she also went to the med bed and started with gently open one of young woman’s eyes and shinned a light into her eye. “No reaction to light.”
“Ma’am if you can hear me, squeeze my hand.“ the first attendant said as she waited for the young woman to try and respond to her request. After about 10 tense minutes of waiting “Nothing.” the attendant cried as she wrote it down in the medical file.
“ She could be in a comma.” the second attendant said aloud as she continued on with checking the woman vitals.
“Brian damage?” the first attending asked worried looked down at the young woman.
“We won’t know that until we get her to the hospital.” The second attendant stated as she continued to watch the young woman vital fail “Just how much longer till we’re at the hospital?”
“Our ETA is 10 minutes,” The driver stated.
Grapping for a neck brace, the second attendant called out to the driver “Careful with that driving, we don’t need more trouble back here.” as she fitted the brace around the young woman’s neck. As she turned to the first attendant and asked “Why wasn’t this done when first?”
‘I…I….I wasn’t sure it was needed.” the first attendant flatly stated
“We always use one, even if it looks like one is not needed.” The second attendant stated as she went on “If this young woman has brain damage, we could be liable because we didn’t use one, understand. And since we didn’t put one on her till now, I’m going to have to report it. It may end up costing us both our jobs.”
The first attendant sadly hung her head in defeat, then asked “How much longer to the medical center?”
“We’re just pulling up.” The driver called back to the attendants then added. “A medical team is waiting for her in room 1 with another team on stand by if she needs surgery..”
The attendants prepared the floating medical lift to carry the young woman into the hospital.
“What’s her status?” Called out of the doctors as she rushed out the medical centers doors.
“No external injuries but she hasn’t awoken since we got her on the transport. I tried to get a reaction to light, sound and touch so for she hasn‘t responded. All other vitals are weak but they are also strong at times. Plus we didn‘t get the brace on her till her had her in the medical transport.”
The doctor nodded as she looked down and said “Miss, if you can hear me. My name is Doctor Delary, I’m with the Southern Woman’s Hospital. Your going to be ok. “ She said as she ran with the floating medical lift.
TBC
Saturday, November 04, 2006
Hours later
flashback
After checking and rechecking his vitals.
“He’s dead!” I cried out.
‘Your troubles have only just started.’ the voice in my head said as I hung my head as shook set in.
I sat in the side street and held him close as I cried for several hours before looking up as a group of elderly ladies walked by the side street.
“Please,” I begged them “Help me!”
I sat there and watched as each of elder Mirialan ladies all shook their heads no and walked away.
I drew him closer to me as I waited for someone to help me.
I sat there crying for several hours before a local security patrol found me.
“Miss!?” I heard one say “Are you two alright?”
“I’m not sure.” I cried as I held his body closer to mine.
I watched as security officer kneeled down and looked at me then at him. “Oh dear.” as he looked back at me. “Madam, your husband is dead!” he flatly stated.
‘Husband!?’ I stated back as I pass out from shook of the whole ordeal.
(meanwhile)
The security officer then looked at his team and quickly handed out order.
“Dennoll, get this sector secure. Releon, contact the nearest medical ward. And tell them we’ve got two coming in. One dead, and the other we’re not sure of her injuries at this time.”
“Yes sir!” Both men said as the ran about to their assigned duties.
The security officer looked at Barriss and said “I just hope we got here in time to save you.” as he stood there waiting for Releon to help move both bodies to medical center.
When Releon came back with transports on stand by. Then two of them start by moving the young female off the young male. “They are dying younger and younger sir.” stated Releon as he helped his captain in loading the young female into one of two waiting transports.
“That they are.” The officer that was first on the scene replied as he went back to help with the young male’s body.
After checking and rechecking his vitals.
“He’s dead!” I cried out.
‘Your troubles have only just started.’ the voice in my head said as I hung my head as shook set in.
I sat in the side street and held him close as I cried for several hours before looking up as a group of elderly ladies walked by the side street.
“Please,” I begged them “Help me!”
I sat there and watched as each of elder Mirialan ladies all shook their heads no and walked away.
I drew him closer to me as I waited for someone to help me.
I sat there crying for several hours before a local security patrol found me.
“Miss!?” I heard one say “Are you two alright?”
“I’m not sure.” I cried as I held his body closer to mine.
I watched as security officer kneeled down and looked at me then at him. “Oh dear.” as he looked back at me. “Madam, your husband is dead!” he flatly stated.
‘Husband!?’ I stated back as I pass out from shook of the whole ordeal.
(meanwhile)
The security officer then looked at his team and quickly handed out order.
“Dennoll, get this sector secure. Releon, contact the nearest medical ward. And tell them we’ve got two coming in. One dead, and the other we’re not sure of her injuries at this time.”
“Yes sir!” Both men said as the ran about to their assigned duties.
The security officer looked at Barriss and said “I just hope we got here in time to save you.” as he stood there waiting for Releon to help move both bodies to medical center.
When Releon came back with transports on stand by. Then two of them start by moving the young female off the young male. “They are dying younger and younger sir.” stated Releon as he helped his captain in loading the young female into one of two waiting transports.
“That they are.” The officer that was first on the scene replied as he went back to help with the young male’s body.
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